Well, your poem doesn't mince words. It's a very raw, authentic and powerful piece. Whilst your stream of consciousness works - for me - I prefer to see more structure in a poem. The emotion is sure there. My favourite line was 'like that soft bread in my tea', very evocative.
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Sure @saltycat I also like that lines as well, it was where I smile while writing. The deal is, tea taste really good when we used soft bread with it, and so was his love life, it just a statement, which show's that everything was going well when she was around.
Thank you for that awesome comment, happy sunday, do have a lovely day.