memories

everything they said was beautiful
it was how they were treated
it was an interesting realizations
they were at the beach
speaking and enjoying the breeze
it was getting to evening.

They all said their minds
espresing how it was
and hoping for a better love
nobody wants to escape the feelings
it is something to keep
but the show began.
As she speak
it starts with some tears
her friend didn't believe
they did not want that
it was a beautiful occasion
they were after the beautiful part
but she never get any
relationship hurts her.

not just one that was better
she felt she just unlucky
but she got luck
she met those that did not love her
it turn's to a different occasions
the friends told her to stop
they coach her
promise her
she will meet someone best for her
she was the strongest among them
not all of them could endure what she did
a strong person indeed.

Peers talks all sorts of things, there are no boundary's, and I believe, it's what make friends.

sometime's, a friend might just say something he did not know, and before he knows, someone will make him to understand the important of going that lane, and also, why he should not.

So, going to the poems, it was about friends too, and they were talking about, how relationship have changed their life's, the beautiful knowledge they have learnt, and where it has taken them today, which they was still counting, and enjoying something good from it.

But among the friends, one of them, did not say it was beautiful on her side, but her statement was bittered, her friends told her to be strong, and she should not think she is unlucky, but to always understand that, a day is coming when she and her prince charming will meet.

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Nice one👍

Thank you very much.

I like how your setting - the beach - evokes a contrast to the emotional landscape. Your poem speaks with emotional depth and the theme of friendship is relatable and grounding.

Yes, that is what it consist of, the emotions was felt by the friends, the deal is, they didn't expect someone among them was going to bring in sad memories.

They wanted everything to flow with joy.