A picture is worth a thousand words

in Freewriters9 months ago

The picture is generated by @wakeupkitty host of pic1000

Rage in the eyes and face
it was just a bird but it fought
strong and parachute covering walls
ruthless but with merciful rules
Diamond rings in the feathers
wanting to be in control of powers

No reason but growling a battle
without an end and none was accrued
powerful mindset
a conqueror of imaginative
swords stick and jacket
replying to cure quest
diagnostic into center's of battle

Taking leads to another road
victorious everywhere and day
Diamond in the group
easily spotted out
throwing up no hard
judge himself so easily

Create her world
put on so many yield
sometimes not differently
in the house she lived
Ruthless ignored
outside fans

Treasure she believes in
To make life better and better
Felt good in the king bed
dislike all negatives perspectives

In the family was much
Minds think alike but disagree
worse to fight
wherever but calmed
point out and get over

Times to see what is perfect
Diamond and bronze whichever
going to make and throw
keeping energy as good morning

pamper much
No lunch but was luck
yield entry into and level up
calmed and perfect

style up and grace
be happy
maintain happy.

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It's a great poem.

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I have a hard time reading this and I wonder who it is about. The bird, the person, both or are these the thoughts of someone watching the scene? Can it be the thoughts racing through the mind of a lost soul heading back home?

It's about a girl who fought her battles and win, even when people believe she was weak, she continues to let them know that she's not a weakling, her life was beautiful and she was courageous to overcome all her hurdles.
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You have a way with words. This poem is lovely.

Wow! Thank you.

I love it that he fought relentlessly, against all odds. A beautiful poem.

I love it too that he fought for what was right, thanks I admire your comment.