VIBES WEB 3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK 28 || AMAZING GRACE (FREESTYLE RAP)

oluwadrey in Vibes • 3 days ago (edited)

HELLO EVERYONE: WELCOME TO VIBES WEB 3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK♥️

I am Oluwadrey, I hope this post met you all well. Happy New Year once again to all my Vibes Friends, music Lovers and Hivers.

SO THIS IS WEEK 28, I decided to do Freestyle Rap.
The Title is : Amazing Grace

I recently saw Verbal D, performance and I gotta say I was very impressed and motivated, to do something more original, I had a long week, so busy at my offline work and business but I Can't miss Vibes for reason.

Lemme tell y'all the truth: one of my major music goals for this year is to always provide my best on vibes, and be on that winner list, It not far fetched goal though, this year would be different.

About the song

This song is about the Amazing Grace of God that always brings beauty out of every Ashes,
And Glory out of everything Bad,
It's a free style rap of how God Can Change live from Nothing to something.

Web2 post and Promotional Videos
https://x.com/Darelove/status/1883476068629418145?t=FImqfqNANrCDVB4qN8xE-A&s=19

My promotional post is here:

I Hope You Enjoy Listening: Thanks for Your Awesome comments too♥️❤️

▶️ 3Speak

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3 days ago in Vibes by oluwadrey

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verbal-d 3 days ago

Nice entry, good to see you trying some new things. I judge hiphop the hardest, so brace yourself, and I will say, respectfully, the rap freestyling I think needs practice for sure. Often times people tend to repeat the same lines over when they lose the thought process, your rhyming could more evident, the first few lines didn’t rhyme, and then you started with some slant rhymes (near rhymes) but it could have been more consistent and varied.
I actually enjoyed your singing and how you switched from chest voice to falsetto, you weren’t scared to give breath to those notes and it produced a strong enough melody to compliment the song. One of the strong points in your rap verse was the direction and overall message of it and the positive energy. So keep it up. But definitely practice and work on the flow and rhythm and conviction (believability) which comes directly from passion and emotional control. Hope that helps

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oluwadrey 3 days ago

I remembered when you told me you really judge rap entries to the Core😅,You are very correct on everything, I didn't actually plan out my rap well, it should have been better, More Detailed and meaningful, I was so much in hurry to post to meet the deadline.
I would do Better in the coming entry 🙏,
I would be doing more of originals than covers this Year.
Thanks so much sir, I appreciate your comment @verbal-d 🤗❤️