VIBES WEB3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK 32 - COVER OF LOVE IS GONE BY SLANDER

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Hi everyone!
I'm back this week with a gospel entry titled 'Love is gone'
It's a heartbreak song you might know well which requires a lot of head and chest voice techniques.
I hope you enjoy this one.
And also shout out to @lordbutterfly
Thanks!

LYRICS
Don't go tonight
Stay here one more time
Remind me what it's like, oh
And let's fall in love one more time
I need you now by my side
It tears me up when you turn me down
I'm begging please, just stick around

I'm sorry, don't leave me, I want you here with me
I know that your love is gone
I can't breathe, I'm so weak, I know this isn't easy
Don't tell me that your love is gone
That your love is gone

I'm sorry, don't leave me, I want you here with me
I know that your love is gone
I can't breathe, I'm so weak, I know this isn't easy
Don't tell me that your love is gone
That your love is gone

PROMOTIONAL VIDEO
https://youtube.com/shorts/sPdj2J9G0Lc?si=Azq4op33CGAb9ebX

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Whaoo, this is amazing. I have so much to learn from you. I love how you made the video and your voice.
You have got an amazing and unique voice. Kudos to you.

Thank you so much
I appreciate

You’re welcome 😇

Hey @kaycee001,
You shouted out lordbutterfly but it seems your "Love is Gone" for me and @silentscreamer lol If you're gonna shout out one team member, you might as well shout out all three, we see everything haha

Naw I'm just joking, don't take this seriously.
But This entry was a nice performance, one of your better showings to date, you are definitely improving, You had some beautiful moments you created with your smooth soulful vocals, I would say that your breath control could be improved and you could deliver those lower notes and longer sustained sections a bit easily/stronger. The airy quality of your singing on certain parts worked well, especially the falsetto section, on other sections it would benefit to have a more clear tone. From 1:45-2:35 was your highlight climactic moment of the song, however the ending of your entry was a bit wavering and shaky. But overall I enjoyed it a lot. Be careful of your breath and consonant sounds hitting the microphone to avoid those popping distortion noises when you're too close or directing the sound into the microphone while recording. Hope all this feedback and constructive criticism helps you. I enjoy seeing people improve, this was a good entry. Thanks for participating and sharing your voice with us.

Noted...
Thank you for the feedback
🙂🙂

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Very beautiful voice

Thank you