You know I love to watch your videos because I see growth and progress in you man. Just keep the consistency and never back down from the target of being a very good content creator on Hive, I will leave you few recommendations bro
P.S: You don't need to full your post with the so much lyrics, you can paste the first and second verse follow by the chorus then proper sourcing and you are good to go..
Source using the link to the cite you got the lyrics from.
Keep shining bro @sundayayuba