Wow, this is a powerful and interesting song, worthy of being highlighted in this edition of the Hive Open Mic, so thanks for sharing it. I'll take this opportunity to give you some recommendations. Don't forget that quality is the most important thing for our community, we also have some internal rules and supporting our fellow musicians is part of it.

One good thing about seeing the work of others is that we can take tools and apply them to our own blog. You would offer more quality if you were looking for an instrumental track, and not singing over the original singer's voice. All in good time brother, but as you can improve I know you will do better, you already have a lot going for you, good sound and lighting, but eventually it would be great to find a space to record and a stable surface for your mobile. I know you will get better, you just need to be focused on doing your best. I hug you and hope to see you grow, happy weekend!...