PostsCommentssaltycat in # • 6 days agoRE: I hardly forget about youWell, your poem doesn't mince words. It's a very raw, authentic and powerful piece. Whilst your stream of consciousness works - for me - I prefer to see more structure in a poem.…saltycat in # • 12 days agoRE: A time keeper broke his alarm With a lightness of touch I liked how the poem concludes with an experience of shared food and information which reinforces the colleagues bond and highlights the human need for compassion.saltycat in # • 22 days agoRE: Superb vegetables I like how your poems are very present in the moment. Standout lines for me were 'where we used to cook the food/ but now on a different mood. I can taste the crunch of the…saltycat in # • 25 days agoRE: When caterpillar's are working From your vivid imagery I get a strong sense of you watching the machines as your vision comes together for your poem. Through snapshots of fleeting moments, the triumphs and…
