PostsCommentssaltycat in # • yesterdayRE: On the right time your narrative arc comes through strongly - moving from the father's regret, moving through the daughter's growing awareness, to their eventual confrontation. I think this is its…saltycat in # • 13 days agoRE: clean spot I really enjoyed your poem about the pineapple seller and your theme was also good - showing the ripple effect of positivity and personal improvement.saltycat in # • 20 days agoRE: purposeYour most welcome friendsaltycat in # • 21 days agoRE: purposeA touching and relatable poem. Your vine metaphor, he keeps his vibes like a vine, I thought was very fitting given how vines are associated with growth and resilience. But also…saltycat in # • 23 days agoRE: Her power's Your poem shines with genuine warmth and love. I especially liked the line 'where i start my conversation from'. It is down to your conversational tone that it feels so intimate.saltycat in # • 28 days agoRE: memoriesI like how your setting - the beach - evokes a contrast to the emotional landscape. Your poem speaks with emotional depth and the theme of friendship is relatable and grounding.
